NaNoWriMo Opening Scene...

Some people have asked if I was going to post my NaNoWriMo novel. Probably not...it's way too long and unedited at this point. But...here's a piece of the unedited opening scene. I'm planning to go back and read the whole thing later this week to see if it makes any sense.

THE BOCA WIVES CLUB

Manny’s Lounge was half full and the three women were getting their share of gawks and stares from the male patrons. The third round of drinks flushed away any inhibitions the women might have arrived with.

The men didn’t mind one bit. In addition to catching glimpses of cleavage and tanned skin, they enjoyed eavesdropping on the game of truth or dare the thirty-somethings were playing.

“Okay, this one is for Kim,” said Robyn, the curvatious brunette with an obvious boob job. “Truth or dare?”

Kim looked up at the ceiling, her dark almond-shaped eyes accenting her Asian heritage. “Hmm...truth.”

“Okay. How often do you have sex?”

“Ooh, getting personal, huh?”

“Come on, we agreed. Anything goes.”

Kim took a sip of her chardonnay. “Three times. Maybe four times a week.”

Several cheers of approval chimed in from the eavesdroppers.

“You’re kidding,” Robyn said. Her eyes widened in awe. “God bless you.”

“My turn,” said Kim. “Melanie, truth or dare?”

Melanie brushed a wisp of long blond hair behind her ear. “Truth.”

“Same question for you. How many times a week?”

“Three.”

“Three? My God, I so really hate you two,” Robyn said.

The cheers were louder this time.

“Okay, now me,” Melanie said. “Robyn, truth or dare?”

“Dare.”

Melanie cocked her head in thought.

“Okay. See that hunky bartender over there? I dare you to go over and grab his ass.”

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